NOTICE TO MY READERS
I have been having a terrible time with the poem titled “MINE” — also temporarily titled “ENTRENCHMENT” — and I have made numerous changes throughout this afternoon while working on it. I would appreciate any opinions on this version or earlier ones, if you have the time to consider it/them. Maybe it’s not one of my better ones?
Thank you very much,
Joanna
Joanna Gilman Hyde 