NOTICE TO MY READERS
by Joanna Gilman Hyde
I got up this morning with an additional line for “Black Against White” — what do you all think of it?
Thank you so much for reading —
Joanna
I got up this morning with an additional line for “Black Against White” — what do you all think of it?
Thank you so much for reading —
Joanna
Hmmm…I liked it before, but now I like it again…not able to say if one is “better” though!
Thanks Kris — Hunter thinks the edited version is better. I think I think it is. And I woke up with it on my mind.
Ask Astro what he thinks.
Allows a whole other dimension of allusion.
You really think so? I thought the additional line merely clarified.